Campfire Stories p.44

May 6th, 2019, 4:02 pm

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arnisd, May 6th, 2019, 4:02 pm     Reply


And here we see a delightful thing, me failing at properly planning out text again!

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Emc_502, May 6th, 2019, 4:08 pm     Reply


bruh why is he so thicc

Experiment04LLZ, May 6th, 2019, 11:26 pm     Reply


pretty sure humans are in some vault somewhere

arnisd, May 7th, 2019, 9:42 am     Reply


@Emc_502: Cause I haven't figured out how thicc I want to make him in that angle

arnisd, May 7th, 2019, 9:43 am     Reply


@Experiment04LLZ: Pfff maybe, I mean Grey also believes that a certain amount of them are at a single place

MercenaryX, May 7th, 2019, 12:50 pm     Reply


@arnisd: Wait, what is that in the last panel?

arnisd, May 7th, 2019, 1:03 pm     Reply


@MercenaryX: What do you mean? Nothing's going on at all

Experiment04LLZ, May 7th, 2019, 1:25 pm     Reply


@arnisd: then that place must be quite secure and in an obscure location like in the middle of the desert or ocean on an island, or maybe even on the MOON!

MercenaryX, May 8th, 2019, 12:05 pm     Reply


@arnisd: Someone escape from the underground didn't they? Are we can I have a undertale crossover now? Not that I mind so much, as long as it is a good AU like the ones where the humans are forced to be monsters after passing the barrier into the underground.

H m m m m m (Guest), May 8th, 2019, 7:06 pm     Reply


I mean, surely they're not bound by some invisible force than prevents them from having more team members.

arnisd, May 9th, 2019, 10:12 am     Reply


@Experiment04LLZ: Perhaps it's just hiding in plain sight 0.0

arnisd, May 9th, 2019, 10:12 am     Reply


@MercenaryX: No undertale crossovers in this here comic and nobody escaped from any sort of place xD

arnisd, May 9th, 2019, 10:13 am     Reply


@H m m m m m: No they're not, but will there be volunteers?

Experiment04LLZ, May 9th, 2019, 10:15 am     Reply


@arnisd: like underneath the power plant or the reverse world?

Minin (Guest), May 13th, 2019, 10:59 pm     Reply


Am I the only one hoo notest the flame throer in the back?

MercenaryX, May 14th, 2019, 2:50 am     Reply


@arnisd: Just saw detective pikachu. It is actually good.

MercenaryX, May 14th, 2019, 10:02 am     Reply


@arnisd: Can you number the word bubbles? The layout is kind of confusing and I'm having trouble trying to figure out the flow of words.

arnisd, May 14th, 2019, 11:12 am     Reply


@MercenaryX: Haven't seen it yet, but that's nice to know.
Also going to refrain from numbering them, though I understand the flow of the text is bad on this page. You read them per panel from top to bottom. It's a monologue mostly, only the last is a reply tried to space it a bit more to the right so you'd start with the bottom one, coming from the bottom one of the previous panel. I know it's a load of text for this one, didn't provide enough space on the panels themself

arnisd, May 14th, 2019, 11:20 am     Reply


@Minin: Or the only one commenting on it and hah, you're right it does look a bit like that cause of the red blur... but it actually wasn't a flamethrower, that'd have looked a lot different

MercenaryX, May 14th, 2019, 11:03 pm     Reply


@arnisd: It isn't the spacing that's the issue , it's mostly just trying to figure out what goes to connect to what bubble. Outside of that everything else been peachy

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